Everything I did, and why: 1. New headline ✨ This is where 80% of visitors drop off. I asked…

2. Onboarding ✍️ Nobody likes to give away their emails. So instead, visitors can directly add their websites from the landing page, even before signing up. That way, they've completed 30% of the steps to get to the AHAH moment. They achieved something. So hopefully they're more likely to sign up.

3. Interactive demo 🕹️ No more external links to try the analytics demo. I added an iframe of a real dashboard in the hero section. Visitors can play with it, discover every feature, like it's their own dashboard. (desktop only)

4. Target customer pivoting 🙋 No more "startup" No more "founder" A lot of recent signups are outside tech Twitter. "Grow your startup" makes no sense for a womenpreneur selling a nail polishing course on YouTube. So now DataFast is not just for founders, but online businesses.

5. More CTA 🖱️ I noticed there were only 2 CTA (signup) on the landing page. If a visitor missed the first one, well, they would have to scroll till the pricing section to find the next one. So I've added almost 1 CTA per section (viewport).

My goal is to improve the biggest bottleneck—signups. I'll track everything using this funnel and scroll depth.

Thanks @DanKulkov for coming up with the headline. Thanks @nico_jeannen for the landing page roasting. Thanks everyone who sent me feedback. At this point, I'm just a puppet obeying my puppeteers

Marc Lou@marclou · Aug 30, 2025How would you rewrite DataFast's headline?